tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1772384416371200442.post2131030808751740821..comments2023-10-16T09:32:28.363+01:00Comments on Ant Faulkner: Film Review: La Belle et la BĂȘte Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07886089912255309919noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1772384416371200442.post-27851425306166346072013-11-26T07:03:05.891+00:002013-11-26T07:03:05.891+00:00Hi Anthony,
Ok, some technical issues - firstly, ...Hi Anthony, <br />Ok, some technical issues - firstly, you are still not putting the names of the films into italics...<br />Make sure you proofread before posting - you have some little mistakes in there that could easily have been picked up. For example, you say 'It is an adaptation of a classic children's story by Mme' - Mme who?? You have mislabelled your images, as you have jumped from 2 to 4, skipping 3! <br />You say 'Produced in 1946 after World War Two this was hugely success with it's sense of escapism' - successful? <br />I know these seem like silly little things, but overall it gives your writing a feeling of being dashed out in a hurry - you are making some really interesting points, and you don't want to overshadow that by careless errors.Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com